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Milamber
 Post subject: My Web Comic
PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:15 pm 
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I am looking for some advise and critiques for my web comic. I am using a very cheap tablet and I am using GIMP to create it.

The over all story line will follow a terrorist attack on the US. It will be a lot like Jericho, but it will be much more in depth.

Let me know what you think... any comments are welcome and I take all criticism very seriously.

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 Post subject: Re: My Web Comic
PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:18 pm 
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um I can't vieew it :?

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Milamber
 Post subject: Re: My Web Comic
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ninja0 wrote:
um I can't vieew it :?



that is odd.. here.. i will post the first page for you

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ninja0
 Post subject: Re: My Web Comic
PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:44 pm 
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Love it. I'm a fan of politics and am very interested in war/history, so the mushroom cloud and torn american flag are interesting to say the least.
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 Post subject: Re: My Web Comic
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dylsupreme1 wrote:
Love it. I'm a fan of politics and am very interested in war/history, so the mushroom cloud and torn american flag are interesting to say the least.


I am also a fan of both. That is what intrigued me enough to write a web comic about the new history of America.

What about the art.. some say it is a bit too "scribbely" (I guess that is the right word)
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 Post subject: Re: My Web Comic
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It's too soon for me to critique on it. It's about 4 pages, not enough for us to comment on the storyline.

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Aister He doesn't want you to comment on the storyline he just wants to know what we think about it so far. It's like you guys are intent on finding something wrong with it. I personally think it's fine.
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aister wrote:
It's too soon for me to critique on it. It's about 4 pages, not enough for us to comment on the storyline.

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